Kia ora Micah, Well done for creating this blogpost and sharing with us your haiku poem! Poems are a wonderful form of expression, and there are many different types around. A haiku poem follows the structure of having three lines, with the first and third lines containing 5 syllables, and the second line containing 7. You have definitely followed the correct structure for a haiku poem, so you should be extremely proud of your efforts! I noticed how you wrote your poem about lamborghinis. How did you decide on this subject for your haiku poem? I also noticed how you referred to these cars as ‘fast’ and ‘cool’. Do you enjoy learning about cars? What kind of car is your favourite? It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know! Keep up the fantastic blogging! Nga mihi
Hi Micah
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you are aware of syllables. Haiku's are a lot of fun to write. Did you enjoy writing your Haiku?
Kia ora Micah,
ReplyDeleteWell done for creating this blogpost and sharing with us your haiku poem!
Poems are a wonderful form of expression, and there are many different types around. A haiku poem follows the structure of having three lines, with the first and third lines containing 5 syllables, and the second line containing 7.
You have definitely followed the correct structure for a haiku poem, so you should be extremely proud of your efforts!
I noticed how you wrote your poem about lamborghinis. How did you decide on this subject for your haiku poem?
I also noticed how you referred to these cars as ‘fast’ and ‘cool’. Do you enjoy learning about cars?
What kind of car is your favourite?
It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know!
Keep up the fantastic blogging!
Nga mihi